[share] Ted Talk :Why 30 is not the new 20

和Lynn討論了這個影片，她和我都覺得蠻不錯的，分享給大家~~~~

是蠻有啟發性且有吸引力的一場演講，我想若能做到她的建議，或許就能get所謂的"成功"人生，而且我想it is never too late，但同時我也相信人都有選擇的權利，得到所謂的"成功"也不代表就是happy forever，很多方式都可以活出生命的價值。

(介紹)Clinical psychologist Meg Jay has a bold message for twentysomethings: Contrary to popular belief, your 20s are not a throwaway decade. In this provocative talk, Jay says that just because marriage, work and kids are happening later in life, doesn’t mean you can’t start planning now. She gives 3 pieces of advice for how twentysomethings can re-claim adulthood in the defining decade of their lives.

(連結)  http://www.ted.com/talks/meg_jay_why_30_is_not_the_new_20

[Memo]Writing for " Applying for a school "

老師上課短暫的分享一篇他修改的申請信，可惜礙於智慧財產權無法提供檔案給我們
，句子都寫得好精準!

句子結構大概是修改最多的部分
大意是提到~
應採取deductive writing而非inductive writing的寫法，每一段都應該有topic sentence，不要讓人從前面要一直看到最後才知道文章之目的(第一段就要提申請原因)，experiences要連結到學習到什麼，strength在哪...

P.S.
善用連接詞(看到一些我較少用的開頭寫法如 In  terms of, Regarding to...)
是work experience(而非working experience)
人稱要一致